Whispers of Time: When Waiting Leads to Emptiness

Douglas Akai
3 min readOct 25, 2024

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In the heart of a dense forest, where sunlight filtered softly through the canopy, lived a sleek, spotted cat. One day, while prowling through the trees in search of her next meal, she discovered something intriguing — a freshly built nest, nestled high on the branch of a tall tree. It was empty, but the cat, wise and patient, knew it wouldn’t stay that way for long.

“I’ll wait,” she thought, her green eyes narrowing in intent. Summer stretched lazily before her, and time, she knew, was on her side.

A week passed. The cat, after indulging in her usual routine of catching mice, grooming her fur, and lazing in the sun, remembered the nest. Curious, she scaled the tree with ease, her claws digging into the rough bark. When she peered inside, two perfect blue eggs gleamed like tiny jewels.

“Eggs might be good,” the cat murmured, licking her lips. “But young birds will taste better. I’ll wait.”

And so, the cat waited. Another week passed, and she climbed the tree once more. This time, five eggs awaited her, their delicate shells catching the sunlight.

“Five eggs,” she marveled. “But still, young birds will be much tastier. I’ll wait a little longer.”

Days turned into nights, and nights into days. The spotted cat continued her routine — hunting, basking in the warmth of the sun, and occasionally glancing at the tree. Her patience remained firm, convinced her reward would come soon.

Finally, after what felt like an eternity, the cat scaled the tree again. This time, when she peered into the nest, her eyes gleamed with satisfaction. In place of the eggs were five tiny birds — featherless and fragile, with enormous eyes and wide, yellow beaks, eagerly awaiting food from their mother.

The cat purred, delighted. “At last, my patience has paid off. But they’re so thin — oh, so very thin!” She frowned, disappointed by their scrawny appearance. “If I wait just a little longer, they’ll grow fat. Yes, fat birds will make a much better feast.”

And so, the cat waited once again. Each day, she watched as the father bird flew tirelessly, delivering wriggling worms to the nest. The young birds eagerly devoured their meals, growing stronger and plumper with every passing day.

The cat licked her chops, imagining the tender meat she would soon enjoy. “It won’t be long now,” she purred. “They must be nearly ready.”

Finally, after waiting longer than she ever thought possible, the cat decided it was time. “Surely, they’re fat enough now!” she thought. Her mouth watered at the thought of the feast awaiting her. She could almost taste the succulent meat of the plump birds she had waited so patiently for.

But when she reached the nest and looked inside, her eyes widened in shock. The nest was empty! Not a single bird was left. They had all flown away, leaving only a few scattered feathers behind.

The spotted cat sat on the branch, bewildered. “Of all the horrid, ungrateful creatures I’ve ever known, those birds are the worst!” she spat, her tail lashing in frustration. “I waited all this time, and this is how they repay me? Mi-a-u-ow!”

She sat there, sulking, tail twitching angrily. “All that time wasted,” she hissed, claws flexing into the bark. “Nothing! Not a single scrap.”

In her quest for the perfect meal, the cat had waited too long. And now, all she had was an empty nest — and the bitter taste of regret.

The cat’s greed and excessive patience led her to miss out entirely.

Sometimes, in our pursuit of perfection, we overlook the opportunities right in front of us. A small gain today is often better than the promise of something greater tomorrow that may never come.

This is a retelling of “The Patient Cat” by Laura E. Richards, first published in 1903. I’ve added a new perspective on the risks of waiting too long for the perfect moment, focusing on the balance between patience and taking action.

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Douglas Akai
Douglas Akai

Written by Douglas Akai

Founder & CEO by day, storyteller by heart. I write to inspire, connect, and share stories that highlight growth and the human experience.

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